What was the topic again?
Mad Kane's Haiku and Limerick Prompt yesterday was about absent-mindedness and/or memory.
Let's indulge. There's an episode of "I Love Lucy" where Lucy and Ethel sit in Lucy's kitchen and commiserate about their marriages being in a rut. Ethel's story was all about how Fred comes whining to her every morning about not being able to find his glasses--and every morning, she finds them in the same place.
Sure enough, a few minutes later, Fred came into the kitchen:
"I can't find my glasses!" yelled Fred.
His wife chuckled and watched him turn red.
Then she said, with a sigh,
As she pointed up high,
"They're right there on top of your head."
Of course, the haiku part is harder. It's kind of hard to fit a lot of stuff into a form that's all about minimalism. (And note that I said "hard," not impossible. When The Worst Writing Teacher In The World said "You can't write a haiku about the Battle of Hastings," I turned around and wrote one. I wish I could remember it.)
Anyway, here's a haiku about memory. Or, more precisely, "Memory."
I always tear up:
Old Deuteronomy says,
"Sing, Grizabella."
Actually, it sounds a little better if you let me have the extra syllable:
I always tear up
when Old Deuteronomy
lets Grizabella sing.
Let's indulge. There's an episode of "I Love Lucy" where Lucy and Ethel sit in Lucy's kitchen and commiserate about their marriages being in a rut. Ethel's story was all about how Fred comes whining to her every morning about not being able to find his glasses--and every morning, she finds them in the same place.
Sure enough, a few minutes later, Fred came into the kitchen:
"I can't find my glasses!" yelled Fred.
His wife chuckled and watched him turn red.
Then she said, with a sigh,
As she pointed up high,
"They're right there on top of your head."
Of course, the haiku part is harder. It's kind of hard to fit a lot of stuff into a form that's all about minimalism. (And note that I said "hard," not impossible. When The Worst Writing Teacher In The World said "You can't write a haiku about the Battle of Hastings," I turned around and wrote one. I wish I could remember it.)
Anyway, here's a haiku about memory. Or, more precisely, "Memory."
I always tear up:
Old Deuteronomy says,
"Sing, Grizabella."
Actually, it sounds a little better if you let me have the extra syllable:
I always tear up
when Old Deuteronomy
lets Grizabella sing.
2 Comments:
I enjoyed those. Thanks so much for joining in on my latest prompt. Hope to see you next Friday.
By Anonymous, at 6:05 PM
(Savannah) I would disagree--the first Grizabella haiku is actually better. The contortions of its wording ring true. It reads like the "real" haiku I've read.
By Anonymous, at 10:15 PM
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